The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Japan’s population: past, present and future trends.

The chart and  table below give information about population figures in Japan.

Japan’s population: past, present and future trends.
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figures in Japan. Japan's
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: in past, present and future trends from 1950 to 2055. The
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is given in millions
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. In the year
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there was 84.1, which increased in 1955 by 90, in 1960 it was 94.3,
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in 1965 it was 99.2, in 1970 it was 104.6, in 1975 it was 111.9, in 1980 it was 117, in 1985 it was 121, in 2000 it was 125.5, in 2005 it was 127.8, in 2010 it was 125.4, in 2035 it's 110 and in 2055 it's 89.9. Over-65s, in 1950
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was 4.1
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and 4.9%, in 2005 it was 25.7
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and 20.0%, in 2035 it was 37.2
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and 34.0% and in 2055 it was 36.5
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and 41%.
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from 1950 to 2055 in Japan in past present and future.
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