The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Japan’s population: past, present and future trends.
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population
figures in Japan. Japan's population
: in past, present and future trends from 1950 to 2055.
The population
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1950
there was 84.1, which increased in 1955 by 90, in 1960 it was 94.3, Add a comma
,1950
then
in 1965 it was 99.2, in 1970 it was 104.6, in 1975 it was 111.9, in 1980 it was 117, in 1985 it was 121, in 2000 it was 125.5, in 2005 it was 127.8, in 2010 it was 125.4, in 2035 it's 110 and in 2055 it's 89.9. Over-65s, in 1950 population
was 4.1 million
and 4.9%, in 2005 it was 25.7 million
and 20.0%, in 2035 it was 37.2 million
and 34.0% and in 2055 it was 36.5 million
and 41%.
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