The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.

The map illustrates two possible areas that are S1 and S2 for building a new

school

in Canterbury.

Overall

, S2 would be the best area to build the

school

, Because of some convenience for the folks.

To begin

, the popular town has a huge number of

people

around the location. It has a population of 7,000 in the North-East.

In addition

, over 4,500

people

live in the South-West. The

the

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main road is located at the

centre

of the area, which goes 5 km to Sturry in the North-East and 7 km to Chartham in the corner of the South-West.

Moreover

, the North location Contains a university,

when

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housing, which has a large population. The town

centre

is located in the

centre

of Canterbury, there is no traffic zone. S1 is located out of the housing unit.

This

plan is not comfortable for those who are living far

along

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from the

school

. S2 is located in the

centre

of the town,it is comfortable for all the

people

around the

school

.

Finally

, the S2 area has a lot of convenience for

people

, they can easily drop off and pick up their children

to

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the

school

.