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Your children go to a local school that requires vulenteers to accompany school science trips Write a letter to the school to apply to be a volunteer. In the letter : – Introduce yourself and give details of your children who attend the school – Explain why you are interested in the position – Talk about any relevant experience that you have with children

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dear principal of the local school, I am writing to you in the hope of accepting me as an assistant in the school’s science trip planned. I am the mother of two of your students, Jenny a Max Clark, who are both in the third grade.
therefore
, I was notified by your school recruiting volunteers to contribute to the trip and I would like to participate it in,if possible. despite my busy schedule, I am passionate about considering myself as one of them because I have a cheerful personality and outstanding skills in verbal communication with
children
.
furthermore
, I can spend more time with my
children
 whom I registered.
On the other hand
, I have some practical experience regarding
children
. I have been a tutor of kindergarten for two years and ,
currently
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 I have been teaching
children
 science lessons in elementary school. I am looking forward to hearing back from you. yours sincerely, Sara Pit
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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