Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

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nations

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have their traditional techniques for health, education and trade since

beginning

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depending on the lifestyles they have. Nowadays, there is a hot topic that supporting poorer

nations

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should be done by richer

nations

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. In

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essay I will outline the importance of giving a hand to poorer

nations

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, and improving their life in terms of

wellbeing

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well-being

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and getting them more educated

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is

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beneficial for all globe. The more a society

improve

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improves

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themselves, the more wealthier they get. In fact, education quality

had

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has

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been

rise

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rising

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for many years and

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led to

increase

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an increase

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in many aspects

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as technology, health, and trade.

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, more often than not governments spend huge

amount

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amounts

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of their budget in favour of developments in health by running

researches

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research

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. In my opinion, gathering researchers from poorer

nations

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into currently running projects, and sharing the outcomes would be a great step for them to adapt themselves into new technologies and bring to their

nations

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, that could be used by citizens.

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am strongly agree

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with

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richer

nations

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could play a key role in

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the developments

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developments

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development

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of education and trade in poorer

nations

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. Currently, universities located in Europe or

USA

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the USA

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has

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have

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multiples

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of

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apply

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international programs for students in order to educate themselves

in

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apply

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abroad and bring

the new-learned

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new

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technologies and knowledge to their homeland. In any degree from bachelor to postdoctoral, many schools in wealthier regions give students from any

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nations

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nation

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including poorer ones a chance to study and work, which could

attribute

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contribute

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to

see

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seeing

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the newest technologies and techniques and

study on

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studying

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them,

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saving money for their families or themselves. In conclusion, there are options for citizens of poorer

nations

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to be a part of the development. If people are willing to live in a peaceful world with equal rights, they should be open to

share

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sharing

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their sources to not let people fall behind.