The graph below shows the percentages of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph below indicates
Americans
domestic use of five different types of technology during 1995 and 1999.
Change noun form
Americans'
American's
Overall
, Linking Words
using
technology increased among people who lived in Wrong verb form
the use of
US
over the period of four years. Correct article usage
the US
In particular
, Linking Words
washing
machine was the most consumed product Add an article
the washing
a washing
whereas
, Linking Words
DVD
player has the fewest popularity Add an article
the DVD
between
users during those years.
In 1996, Change preposition
among
using
of washing Wrong verb form
the use
machine
, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
computer
, Fix the agreement mistake
computers
phone
, and Fix the agreement mistake
phones
Internet
went up Add an article
the Internet
while
a decrease Linking Words
had
seen in the usage of DVD Verb problem
was
player
. The Fix the agreement mistake
players
majotiry
of using Correct your spelling
majority
Internet
Correct article usage
the Internet
steadly
grown Correct your spelling
has
up
and reached Change preposition
apply
to
30%. Alike DVD player had a slight Change preposition
apply
rose
in 1998.
Replace the word
rise
Following
Linking Words
this
, the percentage of both computer and phone users became equal between 1999 with more than 50%.Linking Words
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