You have rented an apartment recently, but you are facing some problems. Write a letter to the landlord: •Describe the details of the problems •How are these affecting your family •Ask for possible solutions

#apartment #landlord #•describe #•how #•ask

Dear Mr. Sanders, I'm writing in regard to the inconvenience I have in apartment 10, on the 5th floor. The issue is that the water cooler produces noise caused by the vibration of some parts that are connected to a water hose.

As a result

, we had a sleepless night

due to

the constant buzz and knocks coming from the storage room. Luckily it was Saturday night and I have not left for work,

however

, it is necessary to fix the problem until the upcoming Monday. I kindly ask you to take any measures as soon as possible. One way to tackle the issue is to invite a service person or, in case of a high price, replace the spare part yourself. As I'm going to be at my place all day long I will be available to assist if my help is required. Looking forward to your quick response, Faithfully Yours, Bibib

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