You have rented an apartment recently, but you are facing some problems. Write a letter to the landlord: •Describe the details of the problems •How are these affecting your family •Ask for possible solutions

#apartment #landlord #•describe #•how #•ask

Dear Mr. Sanders, I'm writing in regard to the inconvenience I have in apartment 10, on the 5th floor. The issue is that the water cooler produces noise caused by the vibration of some parts that are connected to a water hose.

As a result

, we had a sleepless night

due to

the constant buzz and knocks coming from the storage room. Luckily it was Saturday night and I have not left for work,

however

, it is necessary to fix the problem until the upcoming Monday. I kindly ask you to take any measures as soon as possible. One way to tackle the issue is to invite a service person or, in case of a high price, replace the spare part yourself. As I'm going to be at my place all day long I will be available to assist if my help is required. Looking forward to your quick response, Faithfully Yours, Bibib

Submitted by h.israfilov on Mon Sep 25 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

153 words

9.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7
band
You travelled by a long distance bus recently and your suitcase was damaged. Write a letter to the bus company. In your letter •Inform the bus company of when and to where you travelled •Describe your suitcase and what happened to it •Explain why the company should pay for a new suitcase
I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am Sthevani, one of your customers that used your Bus service provided by your company. I am writing this to inform you about the damage to my suitcase after I used the service.
<4
band
Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctica. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
There is no doubt that these days many tourists tend to traveling to difficult places and contain risks places increasingly . the question is , how tourists travel to complex cities and high risk places? Some people believe that visit difficult plases for interesting and exploring thier cultures . While other believe that it is impossible to visit difficult places. Iam going to discuss both drawbacks and benefits and drew my personal conclusions.
5
band
Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Do you agree or disagree?
Some folks think that it is best to acknowledge a bad situation like not liking the job or being short on money. I moderately agree with the view that sometimes people have to accept a bad situation.
7
band
Some people think that the government is wasting money on the art and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?
Spending on government's money on art is considered a waste so according to some there could be other alternatives to spend money on. In my opinion, I agree that authorities ought to spend more on other valuable sectors than the arts as it will greatly benefit society. This essay will discuss the reasons that support to above statement like allocation of priorities and return to the society.
8
band
Digital communication technology, such as email. instant messaging and social media, has improved communication and connection between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Although, advances in technology have made it easier for people to communicate around the globe, but it does not make better relations among them. I think, modern technological inventions have positive effects, but people have made it negative, because they do not use it in an appropriate way.

You have rented an apartment recently, but you are facing some problems. Write a letter to the landlord: •Describe the details of the problems •How are these affecting your family •Ask for possible solutions

You travelled by a long distance bus recently and your suitcase was damaged. Write a letter to the bus company. In your letter •Inform the bus company of when and to where you travelled •Describe your suitcase and what happened to it •Explain why the company should pay for a new suitcase

Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctica. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that the government is wasting money on the art and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Digital communication technology, such as email. instant messaging and social media, has improved communication and connection between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?