The figures below give information about why different
persons
are at university and Check wording
people
also
the support that they have received when they start their Linking Words
career
.
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careers
Overall
, we can notice that most people are studying because they want to succeed in a career, and the younger ones are those who received more help.
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Firstly
, the first bar chart clearly shows that younger students, once they have finished their studies, aim to find a job. We can see that it is the case for people between 26 and 39 Linking Words
years
old. Use synonyms
Then
, for students between 40 and 49 Linking Words
years
old, there are half of them Use synonyms
who
want to manage a career and the other half Correct pronoun usage
apply
who
are studying for interest. And, Correct pronoun usage
apply
finally
, 70% of older persons, who are people over 49 Linking Words
years
old, are at university for interest and only 20% to find a new job.
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Next,
we can discover Linking Words
on
the second bar graphChange preposition
from
,
that the more students are young, the more employers will support them. Indeed, 60% of persons under 26 Punctuation problem
apply
years
old received help with fees or time Use synonyms
off
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off,
while
for those who are between 40 and 49 Linking Words
years
old, the rate is only about 30%.Use synonyms