You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months • say how your work could be done while you are away • ask for his/her help in arranging it . You do NOT need to write any addresses . Begin your letter as follows :

Dear Communications
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Mr. Smith, I hope
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email finds you well. I am writing to ask if there is a chance to join the central office team for a semester. As you know, I have been reaching our key performance indicator since I started
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in
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company.
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, I would be delighted to share my job experience with other colleagues.
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, I truly believe the staff can teach me the history of our
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in depth. That can enhance my knowledge
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and improve my motivation since I am very enthusiastic about learning. I strongly believe my daily tasks can be done remotely. In fact, not even one of my responsibilities would be affected by my brief absence.
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, my coworker, Mr.
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can take over the supervision of my team
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he can be really keen to set up the weekly meeting.
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, he has been showing interest in stepping up his career, so it could be the time for him to come out. I would really appreciate it if you could endorse my plan by writing a letter of recommendation to the director expressing my commitment and accountability.
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, all office kits can be delivered by our courier,
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we have used many times to send to headquarters furniture and documents. It would be helpful if you could
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cost
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the accountability department needs your approval. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Riccardo Caboni

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Tell six months and how you will work there
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