The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The provided line chart
demonstates
the number of shop closures and openings from 2011 to 2018.
In general, after a thorough analysis of the given graph, what can be seen is that closed and opened stores had seen considerable fluctuations between 2011 and 2018. Correct your spelling
demonstrates
While
the closed
shops increased, the Correct quantifier usage
number of closed
opened
shops Correct quantifier usage
number of opened
decreaded
in 2018.
In the beginning, from 2011 to 2014, the figures Correct your spelling
decreased
of
store closures had remained Change preposition
for
plateau
Wrong verb form
plateaued
around
6500Change preposition
at around
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