The following diagram shows the process of cloning a sheep. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
diagram illustrates a procedure in which we can clone a Linking Words
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from the DNA taken out of Use synonyms
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cell
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one
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sheep
. Two stages of work need to be done separately on each Use synonyms
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sheep
and there are exactly three stages after that.
Looking at the diagram, we can see that there are two Use synonyms
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sheep
A and Use synonyms
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B, which are both female. Use synonyms
One
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cell
is extracted from each Use synonyms
one
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body Use synonyms
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egg Use synonyms
cell
from the other. In the next stage, the DNA of Use synonyms
sheep
A is taken out of the extracted Use synonyms
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cell
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nucleus
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the nucleus
a nucleus
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removed. The DNA is Linking Words
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cell
with a method called fusion.
Having our fused Use synonyms
cell
ready, it is Use synonyms
then
taken care of until it is turned into a Linking Words
sheep
embryo. In the next stage, the developed embryo is put inside a third female Use synonyms
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also
called the foster mother. Linking Words
Finally
, the embryo grows up in the Linking Words
sheep
's womb and becomes a little lamb who is a clone of Use synonyms
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