The following diagram shows the process of cloning a sheep. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
This
diagram illustrates a procedure in which we can clone a sheep
from the DNA taken out of it's
Replace the word
its
cell
.
Overall
, this
process starts with two sheep
, one
is the target for our cloning and the other is just a female sheep
. Two stages of work need to be done separately on each one
of the sheep
and there are exactly three stages after that.
Looking at the diagram, we can see that there are two sheep
in the beginning, sheep
A and sheep
B, which are both female. One
cell
is extracted from each one
of these sheep
, one
body cell
from sheep
A and one
egg cell
from the other. In the next stage, the DNA of sheep
A is taken out of the extracted sheep
A cell
while
in the same stage, nucleus
of the egg Add an article
the nucleus
a nucleus
cell
is also
removed. The DNA is then
put into the empty egg cell
with a method called fusion.
Having our fused cell
ready, it is then
taken care of until it is turned into a sheep
embryo. In the next stage, the developed embryo is put inside a third female sheep
's uterus, which is also
called the foster mother. Finally
, the embryo grows up in the sheep
's womb and becomes a little lamb who is a clone of sheep
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