The following diagram shows the process of cloning a sheep. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The following diagram shows the process of cloning a sheep. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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diagram illustrates a procedure in which we can clone a
sheep
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from the DNA taken out of
it's
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its
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cell
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.
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,
this
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process starts with two
sheep
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,
one
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is the target for our cloning and the other is just a female
sheep
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. Two stages of work need to be done separately on each
one
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of the
sheep
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and there are exactly three stages after that. Looking at the diagram, we can see that there are two
sheep
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in the beginning,
sheep
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A and
sheep
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B, which are both female.
One
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cell
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is extracted from each
one
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of these
sheep
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,
one
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body
cell
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from
sheep
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A and
one
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egg
cell
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from the other. In the next stage, the DNA of
sheep
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A is taken out of the extracted
sheep
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A
cell
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while
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in the same stage,
nucleus
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the nucleus
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of the egg
cell
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is
also
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removed. The DNA is
then
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put into the empty egg
cell
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with a method called fusion. Having our fused
cell
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ready, it is
then
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taken care of until it is turned into a
sheep
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embryo. In the next stage, the developed embryo is put inside a third female
sheep
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's uterus, which is
also
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called the foster mother.
Finally
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, the embryo grows up in the
sheep
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's womb and becomes a little lamb who is a clone of
sheep
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A.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sheep, cell, one with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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