You need to borrow some money to pay for something you need for your work or studies. Write a letter to your bank to ask for a loan. In your letter introduce yourself and ask for a loan say why you need the money explain how you plan to pay the money back

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter in regard to the

study

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loan that your bank provides to students who want to

study

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abroad. My name is Manpreet Kaur, I recently completed my Bachelor in Commerce from Delhi University with flying colours. Basically, I reside in Hoshiarpur, It's a District of Panjab and now I want to go abroad for my

further

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studies. In fact, I am thinking of enrolling in a Post-Graduate course in Business Management.

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the main reason to get a loan for studying in a foreign land. As my father is a farmer and my mother is a housewife, they are unable to arrange the funds for it.

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, I believe in myself that as soon as my course is completed, I will land a good salaried job in Canada because there are a plethora of opportunities after Business

study

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, I have earned some certificates

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as Project Management and Leadership from Google programs, which will surely help me in getting work in future. I hope you would understand my situation and approve the

Study

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loan for Canada. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, Manpreet Kaur

manubadialMon Sep 25 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

196 words

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You need to borrow some money to pay for something you need for your work or studies. Write a letter to your bank to ask for a loan. In your letter introduce yourself and ask for a loan say why you need the money explain how you plan to pay the money back

some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It can be difficult for small local shops to compete with large supermarkets and with on-line shops. How does this affect local communities? What could be done to improve this situation?

Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. What could be the reasons behind this? What measures can be taken to resolve this problem?