: You work for an international company and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another company Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: - Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months - Say how your work could be done while you are away - Ask for his/her help in arranging it

Dear Mr. Smith,
This
Islam
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Mohamed, and I hope my letter finds you great. I am writing
this
letter to ask for your
hepl
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help
as I want to move to the
head
office
in Canada for six months.
To begin
with, I would like to work at our
head
office
for six months because I have to complete my
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at Ontario
university
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University
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.
Moreover
,
this
master will help me develop my career path
,
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and will give me the chance to be promoted in the long run.
Furthermore
, if I could work for the
head
office
, I would take care of my current responsibilities, and I
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be communicating with my current
collegs
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colleagues
on a regular basis to finish all my tasks smoothly.
Finally
, I would be grateful if you could assist me with
this
issue. As you are one of our company's
decision makers
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, I hope to have your
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permission
to work for the
head
office
for six months. I
lookforward
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look forward
to hearing from you, and your response in
this
matter is greatly appreciated. Faithfully yours, Islam Mohamed
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