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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to the closure of shops in cities and towns Do you agree or disagree

#growth #closure #shops #cities #towns
Increasing
the
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shopping through the Internet could have a role in enendingdin the
buisnesses
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businesses
 of many shopping
centers
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 in the communities.
In
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 my perspective, I strongly agree that online shopping has made a negative impact on
boutique
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boutiques
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 and the following paragraphs will elaborate more on that.
To begin
 with, online shopping is easier and more affordable than buying from
chain
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the chain
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. To illustrate,
public
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 can buy their goods by using applications on their phones at their convenience from home, which would save time, effort and money spent on arriving at the shopping
center
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. Usually purchasing the products online is less expensive than selling the same products in
market
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, as there is no need to pay for a place to rent or decor and selling the goods at a lesser price, which would encourage
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crowd to buy them from the online
shops
 and decrease buying from
shops
.
Furthermore
, online shopping allows people to buy international products from different countries. To elaborate, before the spread of online shopping a lot of people who preferred buying from international
shops
 needed to travel to another country.
However
, by introducing online shopping international
store
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 are becoming easier to access without travelling.
This
 could lead to a negative impact on local
shops
 and end their business.
To conclude
, I strongly agree that a lot of
shops
 will close because people would prefer online shopping over shopping from centres. The reasons behind
this
 because it is
an
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easier, more affordable and allows easier access to international
shops
 than shopping from local
shops
.
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