Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both views and give your opinion

To begin

with, versatility is one main reason why some undergraduates desire to

study

other courses

in addition

to their main

program

. I can understand them as having information over a wide coverage is advantageous. Meanwhile, tertiary institutions allow students to choose programs of their choice which they are

subsequently

offered when they qualify. University education is

time bound

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and very involving. Most curriculum requires more years than the

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conventional

capped four years for most programs.

Therefore

, if students are made to read other subjects than what they freely

chose

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to pursue, they will only be burdened and may not have enough

time

to

study

their main

program

. The fearful outcome of

such

will be graduating with poor grades.

This

will defeat their aim of choosing to

study

their main course. I will say

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if taking up other programs will be considered, it should be made optional so that learners who think they are skilled at

time

management can take up other subjects.

On the other hand

, the sole aim of studying

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university

program

is to acquire a certificate for employment. In view of

this

, I can understand why people say it's necessary for undergraduates to focus all their

time

and energy

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understanding and learning their main

program

. The knowledge acquired at

this

level will be needed in their future career.

Moreover

, most employers will be moved by graduates with very good results and

such

people will readily get jobs compared to their mates who perform poorly. In my opinion, there is

time

for everything and people can still

study

other courses they wish to know more about later after their schooling.

Therefore

, I agree students use their whole

time

to

study

their chosen subject.

To sum up

, acquiring a job after graduation is essential,

hence

, I think undergraduates should be encouraged to focus on their primary

program

for excellent

qualification

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.