The bar chart shows the expectation to change of European young people in the next 20 years in 5 different areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the expectation to change of European young people in the next 20 years in 5 different areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided chart illustrates the European young generations’ desire for modifications in the next 20
years
in five separate sections.
It is clear that
while
the
quality
of air is not expected enhancement, the noticeable desire of European youths is people interaction in the next 20
years
. It is noticeable that the food
quality
is the sole balanced area predicted after 20
years
. The top expected area is human communication which is predicted will improve in the next 20
years
by 60% escalating more than threefold compared to the figure for air
quality
, with more than 20%.
In addition
, the categories of food
quality
forecasted are to have a relatively balanced rate between an upward and downward trend.
Moreover
, the figures for health and water
quality
are expected with a relatively similar enhancement with more than 40% and 40%, respectively.
While
aspects which have a vigorous trend is people communication with merely 38% being less than an upward trend.
On the contrary
,the expectations for human interaction, the category of health, water
quality
and especially air
quality
all is forecasted to prone to diminish noticeably.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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