The bar chart shows the expectation to change of European young people in the next 20 years in 5 different areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the expectation to change of European young people in the next 20 years in 5 different areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart demonstrates the views of Europe's younger generation on changes over the next 20 years in different areas
such
as health, midcourse
quality
, water eminence, food
quality
and child communication people together.
Overall
, it is apparent that the majority of the participants do not have high expectations for improvement in of most the mentioned aspects.
Besides
, air eminence is the main concern with the lowest score
while
people communication is the sole prospective developed area. To start with, citizens' consultation is predicted to improve in the next 20 years with a support rate of over 60%, which is almost 3 times higher than that of air excellence at only about 23%.
Moreover
, food
quality
is the only area that has a balanced rate at 50% for both supporters of development and of deterioration.
While
the two aforementioned aspects have a positive trend, all other areas have a lower-than-average expectation from the young generation in Europe. These youngsters share relatively similar expectations for health and water eminence, with approximately 40% of them in favour of improvement. Meanwhile, air
quality
is the least prospective aspect, with merely 23% of the surveyed young individuals holding positive opinions on its future improvement.
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