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The table below gives information about the USA's top exports in 2021 and the percentage change with 2020. The bar chart shows the percentage of the USA exports sent to the UK between 2010 and 2020.

The table below gives information about the USA's top exports in 2021 and the percentage change with 2020. The bar chart shows the percentage of the USA exports sent to the UK between 2010 and 2020.
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The display table
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 data about the
USA
's top
exports
 in 2021 and the
percentage
change
 with 2020. The bar chart shows the
percentage
 of
the
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USA
exports
 sent
to
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the
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between 2010
as well as
 2020. The top 5
USA
exports
 in 2021 and the annual
percentage
change
 in 2020. In the electric vehicles,
value
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the value
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 in US
dollar
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dollars
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 is 28
billion
 and
annual
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the annual
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change
 is -40%. In gold,
value
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the value
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 in US
dollar
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dollars
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20.1
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billion
 and
annual
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the annual
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 is -10%. In jets,
value
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the value
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 in US
dollar
 is 20.5
billion
 and
annual
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the annual
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change
 -
25
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%. In medication,
value
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the value
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US
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the US
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dollar
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dollars
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 is 19.1n and
annual
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the annual
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change
 is +1.5%. In petroleum,
value
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the value
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 in US
dollar
 is 17
billion
 and
annual
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the annual
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change
 is -32%. The %
USA
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exports
 sent to
UK
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 from 2010 to 2020, is 2010 it was 60, in 2012 it was around 50, in 2014 it was nearly 45, in 2016 it was between 40 to 60, in 2018 it was more than 40, and in 2020 it was 40.
To conclude
, the above data describes the
USA
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USA's
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 top
exports
 in 2021 and
percentage
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the percentage
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change
 with 2020 and
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the USA
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USA
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USA's
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 export sent
to
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apply
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the
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apply
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between 2010 to 2020.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words usa, exports, percentage, change, value, dollar, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • percentage change
  • data presented
  • timeframe
  • highlighting
  • significant
  • analysis of trends
  • patterns
  • correlation
  • demand
  • potential reasons
  • economic factors
  • political factors
  • social reasons
  • speculation
  • export landscape
  • global events
  • pandemic
  • influenced
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