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The table below gives information about the USA's top exports in 2021 and the percentage change with 2020. The bar chart shows the percentage of the USA exports sent to the UK between 2010 and 2020.

The table below gives information about the USA's top exports in 2021 and the percentage change with 2020. The bar chart shows the percentage of the USA exports sent to the UK between 2010 and 2020.
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 data about the
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between 2010
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 2020. The top 5
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exports
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 in 2021 and the annual
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 in 2020. In the electric vehicles,
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 is 28
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 is -10%. In jets,
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%. In medication,
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 is +1.5%. In petroleum,
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 is -32%. The %
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 from 2010 to 2020, is 2010 it was 60, in 2012 it was around 50, in 2014 it was nearly 45, in 2016 it was between 40 to 60, in 2018 it was more than 40, and in 2020 it was 40.
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between 2010 to 2020.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words usa, exports, percentage, change, value, dollar, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • percentage change
  • data presented
  • timeframe
  • highlighting
  • significant
  • analysis of trends
  • patterns
  • correlation
  • demand
  • potential reasons
  • economic factors
  • political factors
  • social reasons
  • speculation
  • export landscape
  • global events
  • pandemic
  • influenced
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