The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The presented map depicts information about Ryemouth village’s development in 1995 and nowadays.

Overall

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, the huge change was in the east and left south sides,

however

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, on the right south side was almost no change. It can be clearly seen that near the road which is located in the upper left corner and near 4 houses added

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4 houses,

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to a little road.

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, the farmland was changed for golf, and the area where there was a forest park was decreased, and nowadays in

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,place there are two tennis courts. It is obvious that there are a few places which did not move or change their own locations

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as a hotel and cafe which are located on the southern side of the map, but near the hotel was added one car parking. It is interesting to note that in the past sea was used for fishing, and near

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fishing port were places for selling fish and on the opposite side one shop with a similar size.

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, nowadays the fishing port is closed and there is nothing on the sea,

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, the place of the fish market was changed to 4 apartments,

likewise

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,the shop was modified by the restaurant.

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