The map shows the public library 20 years ago and now. Compare and summarise the information in about 150 words.
The given map represents information about public
library
in 2003 and two decades later.
Fix the agreement mistake
libraries
Overall
, there are a lot of huge changes in all sides of the map, moreover
, central
library Add an article
the central
became
modified. Wrong verb form
has been
In addition
, some rooms increased in sizes
, and Fix the agreement mistake
size
something
Correct pronoun usage
some
are
removed.
It can be clearly seen that Wrong verb form
were
left
upper and right bottom Correct article usage
the left
corner
changed fully. Fix the agreement mistake
corners
For instance
, computer games,videos and so on changed for storytelling events and children’s fiction books
, moreover
, there added
two sofas for more Verb problem
were
comfortable
. Replace the word
comfort
Furthermore
, enquiry
desk was changed to Correct article usage
the enquiry
cafe
, Add an article
the cafe
a cafe
also
both places changed their forms, and square
metres increased, Correct article usage
the square
besides
, tables and chairs removed
from the centre.
It is obvious that places Add a missing verb
were removed
such
as lecture
room and computer room changed insides, Correct article usage
the lecture
however
, outside
almost did not change. Only Correct article usage
the outside
door
was changed Correct article usage
the door
in
the Change preposition
to
left’s
of Change the noun form
lefts
left
entrance
.
It is interesting to note that in the past Add an article
the entrance
right
and left side of the centre Correct article usage
the right
used
for adult fiction Add a missing verb
were used
books
and non-fiction books
, but nowadays time has changed and in
the Change preposition
on
left
there are all Add a comma
,left
reference
Correct article usage
the reference
books
, and in
the Change preposition
on
right
there are technologies Add a comma
,right
such
as information desk, self-service machines and so on.Submitted by dimash171206 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover, such".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 9 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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