The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two pictures compare Norbiton manufactory placement as it is nowadays with a planning development in the future.

Overall

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it is clear that

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the main change for the future involves the addition of different buildings,

such

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as a school, shops, and medical centre. The roads will

then

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be able to expand through the river.

On the other hand

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, factories will turn into houses. Today, there is a roundabout in the

center

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with a right-side road and a downside road.

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, a number of factories are beside the roads. In future planning, there is going to increase second roundabout under the main roundabout, and new roads will be built on the northwest and the north sides.

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, shops will be set in the southwest and a medical centre be built in the southeast. A playground is separated by two houses, creating a shorter path that links the building only, and a new school links

at the end

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of the right road.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

161 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
planned future development
factories
warehouses
railway line
shopping center
residential buildings
college
mixed-use zone
commercial
residential
educational
green spaces
pedestrian walkways
housing
community
retail services
revitalize
quality of life
vibrant
sustainable

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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write a letter to the airline. In your letter •explain what has happened •describe the bag and its contents •say what you would like them to do about this problem You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Some people think that the only way to have success in business is to have a unique product. What factors, so you think, influence the success of a company?

People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than the previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? do you think it is a positive or negative development?