Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case. What could the disadvantages of being self-employed?
In the modern century, many individuals decide to be self-employed
instead
of working for a company or organization. Actually, entrepreneurs want to improve their financial situation and have more growth opportunities. Linking Words
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this
can lead to many issues for them Linking Words
such
as high responsibility, stress and enhanced financial risks.
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To begin
with, the idea of having a small business is becoming popular year by year for several reasons. Linking Words
Firstly
, innovators have the idea that small companies can provide high salaries and improve financial stability, Linking Words
additionally
giving more developing opportunities with less time. Linking Words
For instance
, a company worker might be earning 500 US dollars Linking Words
while
the individual businessman can make more than 1500$ in the first months. Linking Words
Furthermore
, there is no limit to expanding and creating an organization in the future, Linking Words
also
it provides flexible working hours and work-life balance, Linking Words
to
the lack of bosses that demand to work a certain amount of time.
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On the other hand
, job individualism has some demerits that might deteriorate situations with finances and health problems. In the Linking Words
beginning
businessperson needs to take risks and buy a lot of things and spend loads of money, Add a comma
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moreover
, if they fail, they will lose all their wealth monumentally. Linking Words
In addition
, self-employed persons bear full responsibility for the success or failure of the company, being stressed all the time. Linking Words
Consequently
, high levels of stress may create physiological and mental problems. Linking Words
For instance
, the National University of Health in London in the research concluded that individual entrepreneurs have higher levels of depression and stress level than corporation workers.
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To conclude
, being self-employed provides convenience and many advantages, but can contribute to many problems and worsen the situation.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...