The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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illustate

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illustrate

the the survey of

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male and female activities

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and leisure.

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The survey

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has considered six activities among the children.

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, most of the boys participate

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computer games

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dancing. With regards to the first pie chart, the

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highest

males

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number of males

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participate

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computer games ,it is around 34%. Basketball

participants

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male percentage is just over the quoter 26% and soccer and skateboarding are the next

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most famouse

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famouse

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famous

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amoung

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among

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male

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males

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17% and 11% , respectively. The lowest

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activity is reading, it is

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accounted

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to boys, girls

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different

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a different

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list of

activies

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activities

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female

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females

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participate

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in dancing which was 27% and

female

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the female

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reading

persentage

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percentage

is

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was

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higher than

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the boys

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boys

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percentage it is 21%. Netball and the computer games proportions are quite equal, it has just

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% percentage

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Similerly

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gymnastics and

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listening to music

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close

partipate

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participate

persentage

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percentage

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