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The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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This
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 two graphs
illustate
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illustrate
 the the survey of
the
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male and female activities
such
 as
cultural
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culture
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 and leisure.
Survey
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The survey
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 has considered six activities among the children.
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, most of the boys participate
for
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in
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the
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computer games
while
 most of the girls participate
for
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the
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dancing. With regards to the first pie chart, the
most
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highest
males
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number of males
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 participate
for
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in
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 computer games ,it is around 34%. Basketball
participants
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participant's
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 male percentage is just over the quoter 26% and soccer and skateboarding are the next
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most famouse
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famouse
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famous
 activity
amoung
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among
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male
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males
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 17% and 11% , respectively. The lowest
attend
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attended
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 activity is reading, it is
acounted
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accounted
counted
2
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for 2
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%.
Compare
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Compared
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 to boys, girls
has
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have
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different
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a different
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 list of
activies
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activities
. The
most
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female
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females
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participate
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participated
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 in dancing which was 27% and
female
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the female
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 reading
persentage
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percentage
is
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was
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 higher than
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the boys
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boys
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boys'
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 percentage it is 21%. Netball and the computer games proportions are quite equal, it has just
1
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a 1
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% percentage
different
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difference
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.
Similerly
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Similarly
,
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gymnastics and
the
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listening to music
has
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have
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 close
partipate
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participate
persentage
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percentage
.
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