Some реорlе think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of а university should Ье to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to аn employer. What, in your opinion, should Ье the main function of а university?

According to
me, both
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equally important. In my own opinion,
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main function of a university should be
provide
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to provide
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graduates with the
knowledge
and
skills
needed in
workplace
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the workplace
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. University should provide
kowledge
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knowledge
as well as
skills
because it
have
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so many benefits.
Student
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Students
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should get
knowledge
about the nation, the society and much more. The
knowledge
which
a
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people
get in
a
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insitution wil
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institution will
help them
at
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in
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work place
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the workplace
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.
For example
, as every
universities
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university
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is providing
intenship
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internship
internships
student
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students
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are getting so much
knowledge
for work.
Hence
,
universities
should provide
graduate
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graduates
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with the
knowledge
and
skills
needed in the
workplace
.
Poeple
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People
should take part in those activities which can help them.
However
, some
belive
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believe
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that
true
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the true
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function of a university should be to give access to
knowledge
for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer.
For example
, if
a
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apply
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people
will
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have
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knowledge
then
that will help them
alot
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a lot
at
there
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their
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workplace
. Things like
intenship
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internship
internships
should be optional.
People
should get those things which are needed. The main
perpase
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purpose
should
to
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be to
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provide
knowledge
.
Thus
,
universities
should focus on
knowledge
as well as
subject
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subjects
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and let
people
do
what ever
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whatever
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thay
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they
want to do.
To conclude
, the above information describes the benefits of graduates with the
knowledge
and
skills
. In my own opinion, the main function
universities
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should
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is to
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provide graduates with the
knowledge
and
skills
needed in the
workplace
.
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