the tables below give information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the tables below  give information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050.   summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
table chart depicts the population’s world and distribution between 1950 and 2000 and expectations for world population in 2050. It is clear from the graph that, Asia represents a higher rate of population over the years.
According to
what is shown, there are three continents that increased Asia, Africa, South
America
and Oceania, Africa
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accounted for 9% in the first period
then
they climbed and is expected to grow by 7% in 2050,
while
Asia and South
America
is expected to grow by 3% in 2050.
However
, for these continents that dipped between 1950 and 2000, Europe, North
America
, the first continent decreased by 10% and is estimated to continue to decrease until becoming 7%
while
North
America
started at 7% and dropped in 2000
also
may continue to drop to 4%. In terms of the total world population, may rocket to 9 billion in 2050 higher than the population’s worlds in 1950 by approximately 260%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words america with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.

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