the tables below give information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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table chart depicts the population’s world and distribution between 1950 and 2000 and expectations for world population in 2050. It is clear from the graph that, Asia represents a higher rate of population over the years.

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what is shown, there are three continents that increased Asia, Africa, South

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and Oceania, Africa

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accounted for 9% in the first period

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they climbed and is expected to grow by 7% in 2050,

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Asia and South

America

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is expected to grow by 3% in 2050.

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, for these continents that dipped between 1950 and 2000, Europe, North

America

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, the first continent decreased by 10% and is estimated to continue to decrease until becoming 7%

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North

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started at 7% and dropped in 2000

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may continue to drop to 4%. In terms of the total world population, may rocket to 9 billion in 2050 higher than the population’s worlds in 1950 by approximately 260%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words america with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

158 words

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