The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart illustrates a number of habits purchasing and drinking
coffee
in some cities in Australia.
Overall
, it's clear the number of people who want a cafe for
coffee
or tea
its
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is
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the highest
percent
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per cent
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than
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of
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those purchasing instant
coffee
or tea. First of all, the
percent
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percentage
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of buying fresh
coffee
is around 44% in all cities.
Although
, Brisbane is similar to Adelaide in percentage.
Also
, bought instant
coffee
it is almost 54% person, in Adelaide largest people purchase
coffee
tether they go to
cafe
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cafes
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. On the
others
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other
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hand, it is obvious the residents of the city, largely people prefer to go to
coffee
. If we look at the chart we observe that the percentage is about 65% and the smallest person regularly 50% in Adelaide, if we compare those who go to
coffee
more than those who purchase instant
coffee
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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