You received a letter from your friend informing you about his elderly parents are coming to visit in your area and he is asking for your advise on - which places they should visit - where should they live - Invite them to do something with you

Dear Yash, Hope
this
letter finds you well. I received your letter that your parents will be coming to
visit
Alberta, Canada in
this
summer holidays.
This
is the best news and I am thrilled after reading your letter, they are coming to
visit
my province as I haven't seen them in years. I
also
read some of your queries related to their travel plan.
Firstly
, Alberta is a beautiful province with an abundance of nature and summer is the best time to enjoy here. The most prime locations to
visit
are the Rocky Mountains and the beautiful turquoise lakes in
Banff
and
Jasper
. These two places are well known for their scenic route surrounded by tall Rocky Mountains and amazing wildlife. They can travel from Toronto to Calgary by flight and from Calgary to
Banff
, they can rent a car or book a bus.
First,
they can
visit
Banff
town, and see the famous Lake Louis and Lake Moraine.After that, they can
visit
Sulfar Mountain and enjoy a gondola ride to see the spectacular view from the top of the mountain.
Then
, the next day they will go to
Jasper
by Icefield Highway.
This
highway is known for its breathtaking views and extraordinary wildlife. They will see the glaciers
also
during
this
road trip. In
Jasper
, they can
visit
the national museum and they will enjoy a train journey within the mountains.
Moreover
, they will find an Indian restaurant in
Banff
and
Jasper
also
they will enjoy local Canadian cuisine there.
Lastly
, about your worries about their accommodations, my answer is not to worry about it as my friend owns a motel in
Banff
and
Jasper
, so I will request him to book a room for their stay.
In addition
, they will be in Alberta and my city Edmonton is not far from Calgary. Let them know to come to Edmonton and stay with us for a few days. I will be more than happy to spend time with them. I will take them shopping at one of the biggest West Edmonton malls. I can drop them off at the airport when they leave. I am looking forward to your response. Let me know if you need any more information. Love and Regards, Urvashi
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