The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram gives us information about how they produced the
sugar
from the sugar
cane.
Overall
, the process consists of seven stages, beginning with growing the Sager, and ending up with the production's drying and cooling.
First of all, the sugar
grows for a period of 12-18 months, which is the longest step in the whole process. After that, start harvesting what they Planted, by cutting up from the root.
The next stage, this
time for my crushing sugar
makes juice. Next,
they put on a Limestone filter to purify juices in a Staidly way. Subsequently
, they Light up the fire on it to boil to become juice syrup.
After that, the centrifuge time to filter the sugar
filtering the heavy parts from sugar
. Faintly, sugar
drying and cooling products are the confidence that the sugar
does not have any heavy pieces now, which means is ready for us to enjoy.Submitted by ra18d.ai on
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