The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These pie charts depict a survey of visitors about the most positives and negatives of
Bowen
Island
. It is clear from the graph that, one of the biggest issues for the visitors was the high cost of living.
According to
what is shown, the most negative of Bowen
Island
is the cost of living which represents half while
entertainment accounts for the quarter while
15% of the people have seen the weather as a negative and the lowest category is food quality 10%.
In terms of the most advantages of Bowen
Island
, the people came with the highest positive by 42 per cent, and the second class is the scenery at 35 per cent, however
, the accommodation is higher than the culture by one per cent.
To sum up
, we could say that while
the half of people argue that living in Bowen
Island
is costly, the accommodation is quite good, also
they have different views of the advantages.Submitted by firasalfadda2 on
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