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In most countries, young people form a large proportion of those who are unemployed. Why this is the case, and what can be done to solve the problem?

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It is true that nowadays there are a lot of problems with unemployment.
Overall
, I would say that there might be some problems
also
 solutions. It is considered that one of the main reasons is choosing
wrong
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 job.
In other
words
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ended
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ending
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profession
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a profession
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 in
university
 or college might not
found
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be found
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 in
this
 city or sometimes in
country
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the country
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.
For instance
, in Kazakhstan just over 40 per cent
humans
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of humans
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 can not find their jobs,
moreover
, 30 per cent of
this
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these
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 are young students who just
ended
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finished
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university
.
Consequently
, they begin to be poor and lose their gold time
cause
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because
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 of
this
 problem.
Solution
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The solution
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for
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to
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this
 problem should find
university
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a university
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,
they
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that
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 should employ young humans for minimum
3
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of 3
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years.
Furthermore
, in my
opinion
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this
 problem is possible to solve
,
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apply
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 because nowadays a lot of universities
collaborates
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collaborate
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 with huge companies. It is assumed that
second
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the second
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trouble
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problem
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 is not
enough
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having enough
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 education for work.
This
 means that young human beings found their jobs, but they were kicked
from
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out of
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the
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their
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 jobs.
For example
, in
last
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apply
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2022 year
university
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University
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 of Nazarbayev found for their students good job, but
cause
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because
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 of not enough education they became free from the companies.
Moreover
, it shows that in some universities they do not teach rightly.
Therefore
, there are a lot of
unemployment
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unemployed
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 people. The best solution for
this
 is
study
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to study
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 hard in universities, and
do
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apply
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not skip the practice lessons.
However
, in my opinion
this
 is less possible to solve, because, nowadays humans becoming more and more lazy. In conclusion, there were two main problems of unemployment.
Also
 in my
opinion
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 only one can be solved.
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