The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
THE GRAPH BELOW REPRESENTS INFORMATION ABOUT THE PROBLEMS OF
PEOPLE
LIVING IN UK CITIES IN 2008. OVERALL
, THESE DILEMMAS CONSIST OF HEALTH
SERVICES, EDUCATION AND TRAINING AND AIR POLLUTION.
REGARDING THE GRAPH, IT IS EFFORTLESS TO SAY THAT THE PROBLEMS WITH HEALTH
AND EDUCATION GAINED THEIR TREND. TO BEGIN
WITH HEALTH
SERVICES, THE NUMBER OF PEOPLE
CONSIDERING THIS
FIELD IS MAJOR. MORE SPECIFICALLY THERE WERE NEARLY 50% IN NEWCASTLE, MANCHESTER GLASGOW, AND LONDON. ADDITIONALLY
THE PERCENTAGES OF COMPLAINT PEOPLE
IN BELFAST AND CARDIFF ARE THE MOST WHICH WERE 60%. TURNING TO EDUCATION IT IS SLIGHTLY FEWER ISSUES IN COMPARISON TO HEALTH
SERVICES. TO BE MORE ACCURATE, THERE WERE LESS THAN 50% OF DILEMMAS IN NEWCASTLE AND IN
MANCHESTER.
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THEREFORE
THE NUMBER OF REPORTED ISSUES ABOVE 50% WERE FROM BELFAST BIRMINGHAM CARDIFF GLASGOW AND LONDON AS WELL.
TURNING TO COMPLAINTS ABOUT AIR POLLUTION, THERE WERE ONLY A FEW PROBLEMS. COMPLAINTS FROM NEWCASTLE AND GLASGOW, HOWEVER
, THERE WAS A LOT OF DISSATISFACTION FROM PEOPLE
FROM MANCHESTER LONDON, AND CARDIFF.Submitted by tukezaliyeva96 on
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