The diagram below shows how oil is expected in use of production of perfume Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The picture describes the
plant
used to extract essential Use synonyms
oil
from the aromatic Use synonyms
plant
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that is
required to manufacture perfume.Linking Words
Overall
, Linking Words
this
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plant
consists of ten parts, beginning with boiling Use synonyms
water
using fire and ending up with separate essential Use synonyms
oil
and aromatic Use synonyms
water
from the mixture. Use synonyms
This
process can be divided into three parts: produced Linking Words
steam
, extracted Use synonyms
oil
from aromatic plants, Use synonyms
separated
essential Correct word choice
and separated
oil
.
In the first step, the Use synonyms
water
in the Use synonyms
container
is boiled using fire and Use synonyms
steam
is collected at the top of the Use synonyms
container
. Use synonyms
This
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steam
is sent to the Use synonyms
container
through a tube, connected to the bottom of the Use synonyms
container
consisting of aromatic plants which are placed in a higher place. Use synonyms
As a result
of Linking Words
plant
mixed with Use synonyms
steam
Use synonyms
oil
is released. Use synonyms
Then
mixture of Linking Words
steam
and Use synonyms
oil
is sent to the condenser. The condenser is made of a spiral tube placed inside the closed Use synonyms
container
. The upper end of Use synonyms
this
spiral tube is connected to the Linking Words
container
from which the Use synonyms
oil
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is extract
Change the verb form
is extracted
whereas
the other end is joined to the separator. Linking Words
Moreover
, it is surrounded with Linking Words
water
to cool the mixture of it.
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This
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oil
and Use synonyms
steam
is received by a separator Use synonyms
that is
set at the lower level of the other items of the Linking Words
plant
. The function of Use synonyms
this
separator is to separate the essential Linking Words
oil
and the aromatic Use synonyms
water
. At the final stage, after extracting the aromatic Use synonyms
oil
, aromatic Use synonyms
water
is released.Use synonyms
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