The diagram below shows how oil is expected in use of production of perfume Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows how oil is expected in use of production of perfume Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The picture describes the
plant
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used to extract essential
oil
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from the aromatic
plant
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that is
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required to manufacture perfume.
Overall
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,
this
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plant
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consists of ten parts, beginning with boiling
water
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using fire and ending up with separate essential
oil
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and aromatic
water
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from the mixture.
This
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process can be divided into three parts: produced
steam
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, extracted
oil
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from aromatic plants,
separated
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and separated
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essential
oil
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. In the first step, the
water
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in the
container
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is boiled using fire and
steam
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is collected at the top of the
container
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.
This
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steam
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is sent to the
container
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through a tube, connected to the bottom of the
container
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consisting of aromatic plants which are placed in a higher place.
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of
plant
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mixed with
steam
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oil
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is released.
Then
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mixture of
steam
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and
oil
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is sent to the condenser. The condenser is made of a spiral tube placed inside the closed
container
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. The upper end of
this
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spiral tube is connected to the
container
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from which the
oil
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is extract
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is extracted
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whereas
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the other end is joined to the separator.
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, it is surrounded with
water
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to cool the mixture of it.
This
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oil
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and
steam
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is received by a separator
that is
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set at the lower level of the other items of the
plant
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. The function of
this
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separator is to separate the essential
oil
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and the aromatic
water
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. At the final stage, after extracting the aromatic
oil
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, aromatic
water
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is released.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plant, oil, water, steam, container with synonyms.
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