The diagram below shows how oil is expected in use of production of perfume Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows how oil is expected in use of production of perfume

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The picture describes the
plant
used to extract essential
oil
from the aromatic
plant
that is
required to manufacture perfume.
Overall
,
this
plant
consists of ten parts, beginning with boiling
water
using fire and ending up with separate essential
oil
and aromatic
water
from the mixture.
This
process can be divided into three parts: produced
steam
, extracted
oil
from aromatic plants,
separated
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and separated
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essential
oil
. In the first step, the
water
in the
container
is boiled using fire and
steam
is collected at the top of the
container
.
This
steam
is sent to the
container
through a tube, connected to the bottom of the
container
consisting of aromatic plants which are placed in a higher place.
As a result
of
plant
mixed with
steam
oil
is released.
Then
mixture of
steam
and
oil
is sent to the condenser. The condenser is made of a spiral tube placed inside the closed
container
. The upper end of
this
spiral tube is connected to the
container
from which the
oil
is extract
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whereas
the other end is joined to the separator.
Moreover
, it is surrounded with
water
to cool the mixture of it.
This
oil
and
steam
is received by a separator
that is
set at the lower level of the other items of the
plant
. The function of
this
separator is to separate the essential
oil
and the aromatic
water
. At the final stage, after extracting the aromatic
oil
, aromatic
water
is released.
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