The diagram below shows how oil is expected in use of production of perfume Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The picture describes the
plant
used to extract essential oil
from the aromatic plant
that is
required to manufacture perfume.Overall
, this
plant
consists of ten parts, beginning with boiling water
using fire and ending up with separate essential oil
and aromatic water
from the mixture. This
process can be divided into three parts: produced steam
, extracted oil
from aromatic plants, separated
essential Correct word choice
and separated
oil
.
In the first step, the water
in the container
is boiled using fire and steam
is collected at the top of the container
. This
steam
is sent to the container
through a tube, connected to the bottom of the container
consisting of aromatic plants which are placed in a higher place. As a result
of plant
mixed with steam
oil
is released. Then
mixture of steam
and oil
is sent to the condenser. The condenser is made of a spiral tube placed inside the closed container
. The upper end of this
spiral tube is connected to the container
from which the oil
is extract
Change the verb form
is extracted
whereas
the other end is joined to the separator. Moreover
, it is surrounded with water
to cool the mixture of it.
This
oil
and steam
is received by a separator that is
set at the lower level of the other items of the plant
. The function of this
separator is to separate the essential oil
and the aromatic water
. At the final stage, after extracting the aromatic oil
, aromatic water
is released.Submitted by subha.mri on
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