The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011.

The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011.
The line chart below illustrates the
number
of cash given to developing nations from five different
organisations
from 2008 to 2011.
Overall
, it can be seen that the most amount of
money
was given from
organisation
number
2,
while
the least
number
of
money
was given from
organisation
number
5.
To begin
with,
organisation
2 consists of the largest portion of
money
in comparison to other
organisations
during the 4 years, which was almost 2. 8
billion
dollars
in the first 2 years, and only in 2010 it reached 2. 4
billion
dollars
and around 2. 6
billion
dollars
was given in 2011. Which was the highest amount donated by all
organisations
in any year.
Moreover
,
organisation
3 donated an average of 1.5
billion
dollars
in total during the 4 years.
Furthermore
,
organisations
number
1, 4 and 5 contributed less amount of
money
in comparison to 2 and 3
organisations
. And the least
number
of
money
was given from the 4th
organisation
with an average of 0.5
billion
dollars
.
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  • international aid
  • developing countries
  • economic assistance
  • fluctuations
  • trend analysis
  • philanthropic organizations
  • non-governmental organizations (NGOs)
  • foreign aid
  • donor countries
  • recipient nations
  • financial contributions
  • economic conditions
  • fiscal policies
  • sustainable development
  • humanitarian aid
  • gross domestic product (GDP)
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