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The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011.

The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011.
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The line chart below illustrates the
number
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 of cash given to developing nations from five different
organisations
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 from 2008 to 2011.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the most amount of
money
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 was given from
organisation
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number
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 2,
while
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 the least
number
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 of
money
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 was given from
organisation
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number
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 5.
To begin
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 with,
organisation
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 2 consists of the largest portion of
money
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 in comparison to other
organisations
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 during the 4 years, which was almost 2. 8
billion
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dollars
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 in the first 2 years, and only in 2010 it reached 2. 4
billion
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dollars
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 and around 2. 6
billion
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dollars
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 was given in 2011. Which was the highest amount donated by all
organisations
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 in any year.
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,
organisation
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 3 donated an average of 1.5
billion
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dollars
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 in total during the 4 years.
Furthermore
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,
organisations
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number
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 1, 4 and 5 contributed less amount of
money
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 in comparison to 2 and 3
organisations
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. And the least
number
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 of
money
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 was given from the 4th
organisation
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 with an average of 0.5
billion
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dollars
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.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, organisations, money, organisation, billion, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • international aid
  • developing countries
  • economic assistance
  • fluctuations
  • trend analysis
  • philanthropic organizations
  • non-governmental organizations (NGOs)
  • foreign aid
  • donor countries
  • recipient nations
  • financial contributions
  • economic conditions
  • fiscal policies
  • sustainable development
  • humanitarian aid
  • gross domestic product (GDP)
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