the first chart below shows how energy is used in an average australian household. the second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates two pie charts, the
one
above shows the amount of energy used by a standard Australian family. Furthermore
, the one
below reveals the greenhouse gas
emissions
, which stem from this
power use.
On the one
hand, the vast majority of the first chart is covered by the energy consumed for heating and water heating, which reaches respectively forty-two and thirty per cent
. Moreover
, the remaining portions of the pie are taken by features such
as other appliances, refrigeration, lighting and cooling, in decreasing order of percentage from fifteen to two per cent
.
On the other hand
, though, the figure that tells us about greenhouse gas
emissions
does not match the diagram on top. In fact, unlike the first graph, the carbon emissions
caused by the heating amount to fifteen per cent
only, while
the one
brought by other appliances, rises to the value of twenty-eight. Whereas
, the gas
discharge resulting from water heating, lighting and cooling corresponds to the energy use. Lastly
, one
important point of mention is the twofold increase in the percentage of gas
emissions
for refrigeration, which goes from seven to fourteen per cent
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