The two pie charts display the conclusion of leisure and cultural activities as preferred by boys and girls
The display two pie charts display the conclusion of
leisure
as well as
cultural activities
as preferred by boys
as well as
girls
.
There are 6 activities
for girls
and boys
they are basketball, soccer, reading, computer
games
, skateboarding, listening to music
, dancing, gymnastics, and netball. boys
' cultural and leisure
activities
, computer
games
are the highest with 34%, basketball is 26%, soccer is 17%, reading is 2%, skateboarding is 11% and listening to music
is 10%. In girls
cultural and leisure
activities
, reading is 21%, computer
games
are 16%, netball is 15%, listening to music
is 10%, dancing is 27% and gymnastics 11%. There is a great difference between girls
and boys
. Boys
prefer to play computer
games
more. Girls
prefer to dance more.
To conclude
, the above information describes the boy's and girls
' cultural and leisure
activities
. There are 6 activities
they are basketball, soccer, reading, computer
, skateboarding, listening to music
, dancing, gymnastics and netball.Submitted by purvaam383 on
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