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Transport Preferences Among Young People in four country

The table illustrates details about the transport preferences of young people in four different countries. Namely the UK,the US,
France
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, and Italy in 2000.
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,
It is clear that
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 the car rates are higher than motorcycles in four different countries
To begin
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 with, Italy's car rates are seven in ten higher than the figure for
France
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. Looking at the information,
France
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's bicycle value demonstrated almost fourth as high as the diagram of Italy. The same pattern followed in
France
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 for motorcycles.
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 the index of the UK and the US showed an equal number of approximately three-fifths cars of youngsters in 2000. As opposed to the USA, young people ride bicycles much more in the UK ,less than a third relatively.

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