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The pie charts illustrate the portion of students at one university in the UK who can speak other languages besides English, in the years 2000 and 2010.

The pie charts illustrate the portion of students at one university in the UK who can speak other languages besides English, in the years 2000 and 2010.
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The display pie charts illustrate the portion of students at one university in the UK who can speak other languages
besides
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 English, in the years 2000
as well as
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 2010. In industrial
use
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, North
America
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 was 48%, South
America
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 was 10%,
Europe
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 was 53%,
Africa
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 was 7%, Central
Asia
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 was 5% and South East
Asia
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 was 12%. In agricultural
use
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, North
America
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 was 39%, South
America
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 was 71%,
Europe
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 was 32%,
Africa
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 was 84%, Central
Asia
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 was 88% and South East
Asia
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 was 81%. In domestic
use
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, North
America
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 was around 15%, South
America
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 was 19%,
Europe
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 was 15%,
Africa
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 was 9%, Central
Asia
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 was 7% and South East
Asia
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 was 7%. The is a great difference in North
America
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, South
America
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,
Europe
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,
Africa
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, Central
Asia
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 and South East
Asia
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.
To conclude
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, the above information shows the industrial
use
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, agricultural
use
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 and domestic
use
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, in North
America
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, South
America
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,
Europe
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,
Africa
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, Central
Asia
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 and South East
Asia
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.

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