Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always good. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some innovation campaign called ‘
people
spend their life for making similar things
rather than changing them. However
, the others believe that the change
is a wonderful selection. In my opinion, our life become
better and better when all of them are reconciled.
On the one hand, similar actions and thoughts are chosen by many Change the verb form
becomes
people
in modern society. First of all, we tend to be concerned when we face
with results which are not intended. They put themselves in a ‘safe area’ where the same Wrong verb form
are faced
things
are repeated as self-reassurance. Second,
this
instance is initiated from
the habits of those Change preposition
by
people
. When they approach the final stages of life, some older people
think that it's too much for them to adapt to the variation. This
is evidenced by the habit of reading newspapers that
is surprisingly replaced by reading through social networks.
Correct pronoun usage
which
On the other hand
, mostly
young Correct your spelling
most
people
support the view that change
brings positive effects. Firstly
, the change
in the modern environment work bring
high efficiency. Change the verb form
brings
For example
, Steve Jobs, CEO of Apple overcame crisis
period with the support ofCorrect article usage
a crisis
Correct article usage
an
think different
’ and turned Apple into a major global technology corporation. Correct your spelling
Think Different
Besides
, change
helps people
to expand their thinking. We discover more and more interesting things
in our own lives, instead
of reiterating the actions which are boring. For example
, climbers constantly upgrade their goals to bring the meanings
to their lives.
In short, doing the same Fix the agreement mistake
meaning
things
or making a change
come
from our own desires. Correct subject-verb agreement
comes
This
depends on many factors such
as personality thinking or own circumstances. However
, I believe that we will discover own
remarkable Correct pronoun usage
our own
potentials
if we select for Fix the agreement mistake
potential
changing
.Replace the word
change
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