the tables below give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five european countries. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

the tables below give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five european countries. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The diagrams indicate the income per year in 1999 and 2004 of five countries,
such
as the UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden by selling coffee and bananas. For each country, the tables show the net benefit in millions of
euros
for both years. The trend of earning is different for each product. One important point of mention is that in the UK, in less than a decade, the gains from selling coffee went from 1.5 to 20
million
euros
.
Moreover
, in the Swiss country, the revenue twofold increased from three to six
million
euros
.
Furthermore
, in the remaining European countries, the profits have not amplified much,
thus
they remained quite the same.
In addition
, from the chart that tells us about the sales of bananas, we can see that Switzerland was the country, in which the gains increased the most from fifteen to forty-seven
million
euros
.
However
, in the Nordic ,territory, the income has dropped since 1999, whilst in Belgium and in the British nation it went respectively from one and 0.6
million
euros
in 1999 to 5.5 and four
million
euros
in 2004.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • sales figures
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • European countries
  • sales volume
  • notable trend
  • exponential growth
  • moderate rise
  • marked decline
  • comparative analysis
  • economic factors
  • consumer preferences
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