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some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. others argue that it is better to try and imporve such situations. discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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It has long been a topic of discussion whether
people
 ought to be easygoing amid adversities like insufficient personal funds or undesirable employment or ,
instead
 they must display resistance by ignoring the
conditions
 that are unfavourable. Undoubtedly, each side has its own merits and demerits to discuss and my own thoughts are
also
 gravitating towards the second option. First of all, life is never equally fair to everyone,
therefore
, some
people
 have to encounter difficulties more often than others. Some
people
 are prone to give in amid financial or social predicaments earlier than others and I believe
this
 tendency deprives them of changing their
conditions
 from less desirable to desirable. As a vivid example of
this
, some
people
 think that it is an idle effort to remedy the existing
conditions
 but rather accept them as they are , since the universe is balanced and what is meant to happen, will happen.
On the other hand
, proponents of the second idea argue that humans have the capability to defend their position in life by showing unparalleled persistence.
Furthermore
, others, myself included, argue that if you are taking charge of life, you will be able to favourable circumstances.
Moreover
,
people
 should realize that there is a solution for everything; if you can show ample stubbornness, excellence is unavoidable.
For example
, I have personally been promoted two times in a row
this
 year owing to my sheer will
while
 the
conditions
 were hostile.
To sum up
,
although
 complying with harsh
conditions
 is an option, I believe,
people
 should challenge the odds and emerge victorious. Even though it is a pretty challenging task to pull off, it is feasible to achieve through patience and perseverance.
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