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Your local bookshop has invited members of the public to recommend a guest speaker for an upcoming event that will include a series of talks from well-known people. Write an e-mail to the bookshop. In your e-mail: • suggest a speaker • say what they would contribute to the event • explain why other people would be interested too

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing regarding your invitation to recommend a guest speaker
on
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 the 50th
anniversery
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anniversary
 of your bookshop.
Firstly
, I would like to thank you for your invitation. I recommend Mr. Geroge Owell, a
well known
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 writer, film actor and director based in Germany.
Moreover
 a celebrity, he is
also
faimous
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famous
 for his speech, especially among
teenegers
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teenagers
. His
speech
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speeches
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 are
immersevely
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immersively
immensely
 entertaining for the younger
gerneration
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generation
. As the second day of the event is focusing on young people, his
presense
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presence
 will be an advantage in the
occation
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occasion
.
He
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 attendance
also
 will help us to attract more people from the other town which will be an extra
benifit
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benefit
 for our event.
Mr.
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 Owell has
connsidered
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considered
 the most admired person for the new generation in the country. His books
are
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 best sellers in the
last
 few years.
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 his film and speeches are critical to the current systems which will attract more people to hear him. As know him personally, Please let me know if
your
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 require my assistance to book his appointment. Look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jennifer Ramos
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