You are a student at a university in the UK. you have recently lost your University ID card. Write a letter to the local Police station. In your letter, -Who are you? -What happened -Ask to record your details so that you can apply for a new ID card.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to register a complaint regarding my lost University

card

. My name is Alex and I am a third-year student at Yorkville University. In my opinion, I lost my identification

card

along with

my black winter

jacket

at the Metrotown Station. As you know, it is a crowded area. I was worried about my bus and

while

looking towards the bus schedule board, I kept my

jacket

which had my

card

on the bus stand rack.

However

, I left my

jacket

there in a hurry.

In addition

, I request you to register my complaint

as well as

my details. My home address is 87679 99 Avenue, Surrey and my mobile contact is 7769567654. Meanwhile, I will apply for a new

card

. Kindly let me know

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apply

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if you need any other information and call me once you find my

jacket

and

card

. Looking forward to receiving a positive call from the local police station. Thank you in advance. Yours Sincerely, Alex

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

170 words

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