the chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided bar chart represents data about the percentage of weekly income spending by families in the
year
1968 and 2018.
Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, it can be seen that the spending of
weekly salary followed a downward motion in food, fuel, clothing Change preposition
on
and
Correct word choice
apply
footware
and personal goods in 2018. Correct your spelling
footwear
However
, housing, transport and leisure expenses rose in the year 2018 in comparison with the expeses
by families in 1968.
Correct your spelling
expenses
To begin
with, families tend to spend their weekly wages less in
food, fuel and power, clothing and personal goods which were more or less 35%, 6%, 10% and 8% in 1968 respectively, Change preposition
on
therefore
, these decreased to around 17%, 4%, 5% and 4% in 2018. In addition
, household expendeture
remained Correct your spelling
expenditure
expenditures
same
in both years.
Correct article usage
the same
In contrast
, housing, transport and leisure expenses followed a upword
trend in 2018 which were around 19%, 14% and 23% respectively from approximately 10%, 8% and 9% in the year 1968.Correct your spelling
upward
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