The graph on the rigth shows the amounts spent on clothes on the Internet in the USA and Japan between 1999 and 2003. Write a report for a university lecturere describing the information shown
The graphic shows the data of cash spent on online shopping clothes in the United
States
and Use synonyms
Japan
from 1999 to 2003.
They Use synonyms
also
always share the same trends in a few years.
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To begin
, within 1999, Linking Words
states
in the graphic show money spent all below $12,000,000 but Use synonyms
Japan
was $5,000,000 ahead of the online payment. Use synonyms
However
, The amount increased in the following year in Linking Words
Japan
and America, Use synonyms
both
had nearly the same amount in 2000 which is approximately $10,000,000. In Use synonyms
both
countries, Use synonyms
this
trend dropped in around 2001 to just below $10,000,000.
The number of cash used in Linking Words
Japan
and the United Use synonyms
States
of America increased drastically to approximately $15,000,000 in around 2002 and Use synonyms
both
Use synonyms
states
share moderately the same number.
After 2003 New Year's Eve, Use synonyms
both
countries still pay almost the same number to purchase apparel online. Use synonyms
To sum up
, the trend is generally increasing, except for the extremely dropping events in around 2001.Linking Words
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