The pie chart details the initial occupations of Anthropology students after graduation and the table record their salaries following 5 years of work in various sectors.

Overall
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, most graduates took full-time positions,followed by part-time jobs, unemployment,graduate study or unknown,and
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part-time work
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graduate study or unknown. The average salaries tended to be much higher for freelance consultants working in government and private companies, though there were many federal workers in the highest salary bracket. A total of 52% of graduates were employed full-time, compared to 15% part-time, 12% unemployed, 8% categorised as unknown 8% pursuing full-time
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education and
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5% combining part-time work
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higher education study. Turning to the table, freelance consultants were overwhelmingly employed in the upper pay scales at 40% in both $75,000- 99,999 and $100,000+, with just 20% making between $ 25,000 and $ 74,999. Government employees displayed a broadly similar pattern with identical figures at the two lowest pay bands, 30% in the $75,000 to 99,999 range and 50% earning over a hundred thousand dollars a year. Private company's salaries diverted generally with 10% in the lowest income range , a striking 35% earning $50,000 to $ 74,000,
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25% and 30% of graduates made $ 75,000- $ 99,999 and $ 100,000+ respectively.

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