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Percentage of household budget for necessities in China

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many
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percentage
precentage
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percentage
 of spending on significant goods in
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Chinese
Chineese
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China
 during the period from 1995 to 2011
Overall
, it is evident that, in all types of household
budget
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 there was only minimal change over the
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 period.
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, it is
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 worth mentioning that, the
rate
 of medicine experienced remarkable growth.
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, source of clothing comprised
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19% in the first
year
 and
this
 showed only a very negligible decline of about a mere 1 % to 18% in 2011.
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, in 1995 household goods generated 9% which improved minimally to 12% 16
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 later. The
rate
 of food was 68% and it plunged by 9% in the second
year
. When it comes to
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 of medicine, it was 4% in 1995.
Then
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 climbed from 4% to 11%
at the end
 of the given period.
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