The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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table presents the sum of the tourists to Ashdown Museum before and after the refurbishment.

Besides

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, these charts represent the satisfactory level of the travellers in

the

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terms of their

visting

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visiting

period. Here, we can see that

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the number of

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tourists in total increased after the

year

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of reconstruction.

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, the

satisfactory

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satisfaction

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level is seen higher as well in the surveys. The dissatisfactory level is seen

declined

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after refurbishment. The

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before reconstruction the statistics of visitors were 74000 in total per

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the data is shown inclined to 92000 just the next

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of It's upgradation. A direct impact can be seen. In the surveys, people were mostly dissatisfied previously compared to the following years of improvement. Only 15% and 30%

visitors

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were satisfied and very satisfied respectively before

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40% and 35%

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the percentage Later.

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, the sum of very disappointed

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halven

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halved

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but the percentage of No response remains the same.