You recently bought an oven for your kitchen but it does not work. You called up the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter: • describe the problem with the oven • explain what happened when you called up the shop • State what you would like the manager to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with your
camp
that is
so I am afraid to say I have a number of complaints about because
Last
week, I arrived from holiday and I was not satisfied that on the
camp
you in the mountains. For the main reasons ,
for example
, the first problem is that the
camp
did not work good heat systems and it was a cold day because at that time was winter.
Besides
, food was not enough
as a result
of I was hungry, not only food and water were not enough,but
also
there were not enough fields.
In addition
, the mountain did not have big fields and beautiful places,
for example
, it had no animals, forests, or plants. Only one
camp
had clear air. Of
this
for the sake of even my become worse health. So I all in view of I feel I am entitled to some compensation for the inconvenience I have suffered or I would be grateful if my money was fully refunded. I would like to request that.I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Qaxxorov Ravshan
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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