People aim to achieve a balance between their work and lives, but few people achieve it. what are the causes of this problem? How lo overcome il?
Nowadays, we hear a lot about work-life balance in our society, ev
Another issue that has affected the balance is job culture. In recent times,
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
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Linking word examples:
- firstly
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- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
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- however
- although
- even though
- despite