During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a bussinessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this bussinessman. In your letter • remind him when and where you met • tell him what kind of job you are interested in • say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Mr. Taylor,
I am writing to your suggestion that you made on the plane, the journey from Turkish airport to Canada. As far as I understood, you have got some restaurant branches, and I have been seeking a
job
in
the past 2 months. Change preposition
for
Consequently
, you told me to contact you later for a possible job
in your restaurant.
I studied food
science and technology which is related to your business. I am truly fascinated by food
and everything related to it. I am in favour of observing food
safety in your restaurant if it is possible. Also
, I do not mind being a chef assistant, as far as I am keen to cook food
in restaurants.
I have made lots of efforts to get a better job
prospect in my life. As a result
, I have enrolled in four cooking courses in Canada, and all certifications are available. What's more, I am really passionate about food
and have been looking for a job
related to it. Therefore
, I know a lot about food
safety and can be useful in your business. As a result
, I suppose that I am eligible enough to work for you.
I would be grateful if you consider me in hiring your employees. Please let me know if you make a decision. I will provide my number, and you can contact me at any time.
Yours faithfully,
John SmithSubmitted by bb_emperator on
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tone
Maintain formal and professional tone throughout the letter.
structure
Ensure a clear and organized structure of the letter with well-defined paragraphs.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite