You and your friend have both been accepted to a study abroad programme in Paris France. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter : Congratulate him/her for also being accepted Ask him/her if she would like to be your roommate Discuss possible activities that the two of you could do together Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follow: Dear,

#friend #study #programme #paris #france #roommate #activities #two #addresses

Dear John, How have you been? I'm sorry that I couldn't write to you earlier because I was catching up with my Paris admission stuff. What a surprise buddy! I couldn't believe it when I heard about your study plans in the same city. Believe me, I never felt

such

cheerfulness before which I'm experiencing now after thinking about you and I will be together again after 5 years. Anyways, hearty congratulations on your application acceptance by the university. It'll be more fun if we could live as roommates abroad. It will be more convenient for us to share the place with a known person rather than any random student.

Moreover

, we could study together like we did in our school time, and we could plan to roam around Europe during our vacations to enjoy our study period. I hope you're as excited as I am. I am eagerly waiting for your response. With love, Ned

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task response

Please ensure to fully respond to all the requirements of the task prompt and include more specific details related to the possible activities to be done together.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are well-crafted and maintain a friendly, informal tone. Keep the coherence and cohesion strong throughout the letter by maintaining the flow of ideas and connecting sentences more smoothly.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

156 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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